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  1. #41
    داره خودمونی میشه Amin Uljay's Avatar
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    Very thank!
    it was very good!
    So hard too!
    If you can tell easy and very short stories and jokes again!

  2. #42
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    THE BURGLARS FRIEND
    it was 3 o'clock in the moning when four-year-old Russell Brown woke up to go to the bothroom.
    His parents were fast asleep in bed.but when he heard a noise in the living room and saw a light was on, hewent downstairs.
    There he found two men. they asked him his name and told him they were friends of the family.
    Unfortunately, Russell believed them. they asked him where the VCR and TV were. Russell showed them and said they had a stereo and CD player, too.
    The two men carried these to the kitchen. Russell also told them that his mother kept her wallet in a drawer in the kitchen, so they took that. Russell even gave them his packet money.
    They finally left at 4 A.M .
    They said, Wil you open the back door while we take these things to the car, because we don't want to wake Mommy and daddy, OK? so Russell held the door open for them.
    He then went back to bed.
    His parents didn't know about the burglary until they got up the next day. His father said,"I couldn't be angry with Russell because he thought he was doing the right thing."
    Fortunately, the police caught the two burglars .

  3. #43
    حـــــرفـه ای Reza1969's Avatar
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    1 Little Red Riding Hood

    Little Red Riding Hood

    Once upon a time . . . in the middle of a thick forest stood a small
    cottage, the home of a pretty little girl known to everyone as Little Red
    Riding Hood. One day, her Mummy waved her goodbye at the garden gate, saying:
    "Grandma is ill. Take her this basket of cakes, but be very careful. Keep to
    the path through the wood and don't ever stop. That way, you will come to no
    harm."
    Little Red Riding Hood kissed her mother and ran off. "Don't worry,' she
    said, "I'll run all the way to Grandma's without stopping."
    Full of good intentions, the little girl made her way through the wood, but
    she was soon to forget her mother's wise words. "What lovely strawberries! And
    so red . . ."
    Laying her basket on the ground, Little Red Riding Hood bent over the
    strawberry plants. "They're nice and ripe, and so big! Yummy! Delicious! Just
    another one. And one more. This is the last . . . Well, this one . . . Mmmm."
    The red fruit peeped invitingly through the leaves in the grassy glade, and
    Little Red Riding Hood ran back and forth popping strawberries into her mouth.
    Suddenly she remembered her mother, her promise, Grandma and the basket . . .
    and hurried back towards the path. The basket was still in the grass and,
    humming to herself, Little Red Riding Hood walked on.
    The wood became thicker and thicker. Suddenly a yellow butterfly fluttered
    down through the trees. Little Red Riding Hood started to chase the butterfly.
    "I'll catch you! I'll catch you!" she called. Suddenly she saw some large
    daisies in the grass.
    "Oh, how sweet!" she exclaimed and, thinking of Grandma, she picked a large
    bunch of flowers.
    In the meantime, two wicked eyes were spying on her from behind a tree . .
    a strange rustling in the woods made Little Red Riding Hood's heart thump.
    Now quite afraid she said to herself. "I must find the path and run away
    from here!"
    At last she reached the path again but her heart leapt into her mouth at
    the sound of a gruff voice which said: "Where ' . . are you going, my pretty
    girl, all alone in the woods?"
    "I'm taking Grandma some cakes. She lives at the end of the path," said
    Little Riding Hood in a faint voice.
    When he heard this, the wolf (for it was the big bad wolf himself) politely
    asked: "Does Grandma live by herself?"
    "Oh, yes," replied Little Red Riding Hood, "and she never opens the door to
    strangers!"
    "Goodbye. Perhaps we'll meet again," replied the wolf. Then he loped away
    thinking to himself "I'll gobble the grandmother first, then lie in wait for
    the grandchild!" At last, the cottage came in sight. Knock! Knock! The wolf
    rapped on the door. --~ "Who's there?" cried Grandma from her bed.
    "It's me, Little Red Riding Hood. I've brought you some cakes because
    you're ill," replied the wolf, trying hard to hide his gruff voice.
    "Lift the latch and come in," said Grandma, unaware of anything amiss, till
    a horrible shadow appeared on the wall. Poor Grandma! For in one bound, the
    wolf leapt across the room and, in a single mouthful, swallowed the old lady.
    Soon after, Little Red Riding Hood tapped on the door.
    "Grandma, can I come in?" she called.
    Now, the wolf had put on the old lady's shawl and cap and slipped into the
    bed. Trying to imitate Grandma's quavering little voice, he replied: "Open the latch and come in!
    "What a deep voice you have," said the little girl in surpnse.
    "The better to greet you with," said the wolf.
    "Goodness, what big eyes you have."
    "The better to see you with."
    "And what big hands you have!" exclaimed Little Red Riding Hood, stepping
    over to the bed.
    "The better to hug you with," said the wolf.
    "What a big mouth you have," the little girl murmured in a weak voice.
    "The better to eat you with!" growled the wolf, and jumping out of bed, he
    swallowed her up too. Then, with a fat full tummy, he fell fast asleep.
    In the meantime, a hunter had emerged from the wood, and on noticing the
    cottage, he decided to stop and ask for a drink. He had spent a lot of time
    trying to catch a large wolf that had been terrorizing the neighbourhood, but
    had lost its tracks. The hunter could hear a strange whistling sound; it
    seemed to be coming from inside the cottage. He peered through the window ...
    and saw the large wolf himself, with a fat full tummy, snoring away in
    Grandma's bed.
    "The wolf! He won't get away this time!"
    Without making a sound, the hunter carefully loaded his gun and gently
    opened the window. He pointed the barrel straight at the wolf's head and . . .
    BANG! The wolf was dead.
    "Got you at last!" shouted the hunter in glee. "You'll never frighten
    anyone agaln.
    He cut open the wolf's stomach and to his amazement, out popped Grandma and
    Little Red Riding Hood, safe and unharmed.
    "You arrived just in time," murmured the old lady, quite overcome by all
    the excitement. ~
    "It's safe to go home now," the hunter told Little Red Riding Hood. "The
    big bad wolf is dead and gone, and there is no danger on the path.
    Still scared, the little girl hugged her grandmother. Oh, what a dreadful
    fright!"
    Much later, as dusk was falling, Little Red Riding Hood's mother arrived,
    all out of breath, worried because her llttle girl had not come home. And when
    she saw Little Red Riding Hood, safe and sound, she burst into tears of joy.
    After thanking the hunter again, Little Red Rldlng Hood and her mother set
    off towards the wood. As they walked quickly through the trees, the little
    girl told her mother: "We must always keep to the path and never stop. That
    way, we come to no harm!"

  4. #44
    آخر فروم باز amintnt's Avatar
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    نقل قول نوشته شده توسط behnam karami
    THE BURGLARS FRIEND
    it was 3 o'clock in the moning when four-year-old Russell Brown woke up to go to the bothroom.
    His parents were fast asleep in bed.but when he heard a noise in the living room and saw a light was on, hewent downstairs.
    There he found two men. they asked him his name and told him they were friends of the family.
    Unfortunately, Russell believed them. they asked him where the VCR and TV were. Russell showed them and said they had a stereo and CD player, too.
    The two men carried these to the kitchen. Russell also told them that his mother kept her wallet in a drawer in the kitchen, so they took that. Russell even gave them his packet money.
    They finally left at 4 A.M .
    They said, Wil you open the back door while we take these things to the car, because we don't want to wake Mommy and daddy, OK? so Russell held the door open for them.
    He then went back to bed.
    His parents didn't know about the burglary until they got up the next day. His father said,"I couldn't be angry with Russell because he thought he was doing the right thing."
    This is written in one of interchange work books. In fact, It's a true story. credulous Russel!.d


    Once upon a time . . . in the middle of a thick forest stood a small
    cottage, the home of a pretty little girl known to everyone as Little Red
    Riding Hood. One day, her Mummy waved her goodbye at the garden gate, saying:
    "Grandma is ill. Take her this basket of cakes, but be very careful. Keep to
    the path through the wood and don't ever stop. That way, you will come to no
    harm."
    Little Red Riding Hood kissed her mother and ran off. "Don't worry,' she
    said, "I'll run all the way to Grandma's without stopping."
    Full of good intentions, the little girl made her way through the wood, but
    she was soon to forget her mother's wise words. "What lovely strawberries! And
    so red . . ."
    Laying her basket on the ground, Little Red Riding Hood bent over the
    strawberry plants. "They're nice and ripe, and so big! Yummy! Delicious! Just
    another one. And one more. This is the last . . . Well, this one . . . Mmmm."
    The red fruit peeped invitingly through the leaves in the grassy glade, and
    Little Red Riding Hood ran back and forth popping strawberries into her mouth.
    Suddenly she remembered her mother, her promise, Grandma and the basket . . .
    and hurried back towards the path. The basket was still in the grass and,
    humming to herself, Little Red Riding Hood walked on.
    The wood became thicker and thicker. Suddenly a yellow butterfly fluttered
    down through the trees. Little Red Riding Hood started to chase the butterfly.
    "I'll catch you! I'll catch you!" she called. Suddenly she saw some large
    daisies in the grass.
    "Oh, how sweet!" she exclaimed and, thinking of Grandma, she picked a large
    bunch of flowers.
    In the meantime, two wicked eyes were spying on her from behind a tree . .
    a strange rustling in the woods made Little Red Riding Hood's heart thump.
    Now quite afraid she said to herself. "I must find the path and run away
    from here!"
    At last she reached the path again but her heart leapt into her mouth at
    the sound of a gruff voice which said: "Where ' . . are you going, my pretty
    girl, all alone in the woods?"
    "I'm taking Grandma some cakes. She lives at the end of the path," said
    Little Riding Hood in a faint voice.
    When he heard this, the wolf (for it was the big bad wolf himself) politely
    asked: "Does Grandma live by herself?"
    "Oh, yes," replied Little Red Riding Hood, "and she never opens the door to
    strangers!"
    "Goodbye. Perhaps we'll meet again," replied the wolf. Then he loped away
    thinking to himself "I'll gobble the grandmother first, then lie in wait for
    the grandchild!" At last, the cottage came in sight. Knock! Knock! The wolf
    rapped on the door. --~ "Who's there?" cried Grandma from her bed.
    "It's me, Little Red Riding Hood. I've brought you some cakes because
    you're ill," replied the wolf, trying hard to hide his gruff voice.
    "Lift the latch and come in," said Grandma, unaware of anything amiss, till
    a horrible shadow appeared on the wall. Poor Grandma! For in one bound, the
    wolf leapt across the room and, in a single mouthful, swallowed the old lady.
    Soon after, Little Red Riding Hood tapped on the door.
    "Grandma, can I come in?" she called.
    Now, the wolf had put on the old lady's shawl and cap and slipped into the
    bed. Trying to imitate Grandma's quavering little voice, he replied: "Open the latch and come in!
    "What a deep voice you have," said the little girl in surpnse.
    "The better to greet you with," said the wolf.
    "Goodness, what big eyes you have."
    "The better to see you with."
    "And what big hands you have!" exclaimed Little Red Riding Hood, stepping
    over to the bed.
    "The better to hug you with," said the wolf.
    "What a big mouth you have," the little girl murmured in a weak voice.
    "The better to eat you with!" growled the wolf, and jumping out of bed, he
    swallowed her up too. Then, with a fat full tummy, he fell fast asleep.
    In the meantime, a hunter had emerged from the wood, and on noticing the
    cottage, he decided to stop and ask for a drink. He had spent a lot of time
    trying to catch a large wolf that had been terrorizing the neighbourhood, but
    had lost its tracks. The hunter could hear a strange whistling sound; it
    seemed to be coming from inside the cottage. He peered through the window ...
    and saw the large wolf himself, with a fat full tummy, snoring away in
    Grandma's bed.
    "The wolf! He won't get away this time!"
    Without making a sound, the hunter carefully loaded his gun and gently
    opened the window. He pointed the barrel straight at the wolf's head and . . .
    BANG! The wolf was dead.
    "Got you at last!" shouted the hunter in glee. "You'll never frighten
    anyone agaln.
    He cut open the wolf's stomach and to his amazement, out popped Grandma and
    Little Red Riding Hood, safe and unharmed.
    "You arrived just in time," murmured the old lady, quite overcome by all
    the excitement. ~
    "It's safe to go home now," the hunter told Little Red Riding Hood. "The
    big bad wolf is dead and gone, and there is no danger on the path.
    Still scared, the little girl hugged her grandmother. Oh, what a dreadful
    fright!"
    Much later, as dusk was falling, Little Red Riding Hood's mother arrived,
    all out of breath, worried because her llttle girl had not come home. And when
    she saw Little Red Riding Hood, safe and sound, she burst into tears of joy.
    After thanking the hunter again, Little Red Rldlng Hood and her mother set
    off towards the wood. As they walked quickly through the trees, the little
    girl told her mother: "We must always keep to the path and never stop. That
    way, we come to no harm
    Isn't it our SHENEL GHERMEZY?!:Laughing:. Y this story is different everywhere?! In persian, The story is a bit different. I don't remember any hunter!
    really thanks dear Reza, it brought me some new words.
    Good Luck

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    12 never forget

    still remember it as if it were yesterday. The day I ended the life of my best friend. The sound of her voice begging me to slow down will haunt me till the day I die but after what I did, I can truly say that I deserve that and more. I will never forgive myself. -Flashback-
    "Jesse, slow down, we're going too fast!" "It's all right Amber, I can handle it. You know I would never do anything to hurt you." "Jesse, please stop. I am scared. “She cried.”I won't let anything happen to you." -End of flashback-
    But I did hurt her. I was drunk and didn't notice how fast I was going. A kid, that's all I was. A sixteen-year old boy who thought he could handle anything. I used to be so happy. I had the perfect life and now I get to cry myself to sleep thinking about how I hurt the only girl I ever loved and will ever love.
    One year earlier
    "Come on Amber, no one cares about what you wear." "Speak for yourself! What about this shirt Jess?" "It's fine, now can we go?" "I'll be there in a minute." "Girls." Jesse mumbled rolling his eyes. "I heard that!" Amber said from her bathroom. To her I was just like a brother. It was the same for me until three years ago. I don't know what happened to me. One second she was like my sister, the next I had fallen in love with her. Every one knows how I feel except for Amber. Now, she's the love of my life, the only one for me but of course I haven't told her yet. I will someday but not right now. When we're older and she's ready to hear it, I'll tell her. We were finally on our way to the party. We had the music blasting and we were talking, laughing and singing like we always did. I had finally convinced her parents to let me take her. I promised to take care of her. They knew I would die for her if it came to that and she would do the same for me. We've been friends since the day we were born. Same day, same hospital and two hours apart, me being the oldest. Our parents had been old friends from high school. The four of them had been inseparable just like Amber and I. As I parked my car a few houses away from the party, Amber started getting a little nervous seeing as she had never been to a party like this before. So I took her hand and gently pulled her to the door. Inside, we met some friends and decided to dance when Terry, a guy from our school, offered me a beer. Amber told me not to but I told her that I would only have one. So she let me. The only problem was that one turned into two and two turned into three. We were still dancing by then, I started to get dizzy and Amber noticed. "Jess come sit down a bit, I think you've had enough to drink." she said removing the bottle of beer from my hand and replacing it with a bottle of water instead. I never did have a high tolerance for alcohol. Feeling a little queasy, I laid my head on Amber's shoulder since she had seated herself next to me. Soon enough I fell asleep. About a half-hour later, I woke up still with my head on Amber's shoulder. When I stood up to go back to the dance floor, my head felt as if someone had hit it with a baseball bat a few times but I told Amber I was fine because I didn't want to worry her. When Amber left to go to the washroom, I decided to have another beer. That was a big mistake. When she got back and saw that I could barely stand on my own two feet, she knew right away what I had done. "Jesse! Don't tell me you had another drink!" I had never seen her so mad at me before. "Okay then, I won't." I replied. "Don't you get smart with me!" "Jeez, now you sound like my mother." "I'm going to go call Brady so that he can pick us up." "Don't bother your brother. I'll be fine." With that I headed out the door and to my car. After managing to open the door, I got in and rested my head on the steering wheel when Amber banged on the window. "What the hell did you do that for!?" "Jesse open this door right now. You know you can't drive like this." "I'll be fine Amber." I insisted. "Then I'm coming with you. There's no way you're going alone." She said as she got into the car. She tried to grab the car keys but the second her door had closed I drove off. I started off at 100 km per hour and quickly reached 160. "Jesse, pull over and we'll call my brother. You can come get your car tomorrow." "It's OK. I'm fine." "Jesse, slow down we're going too fast." "No we're not." "What do you mean! You're doing 160!" She shouted. "It's all right Amber, I can handle it. You know I would never do anything to hurt you." "Jesse, please stop, I'm scared." She started crying. "I promise I won't let anything happen to you." "JESSE! WATCH-" I turned my attention to the road when I saw another car slam into mine. I threw myself on Amber but her head hit and smashed the window of her door. I woke up a few hours later in the hospital with a few scrapes, scratches and bruises. "Amber!" I yelled. A nurse came running in. "Where's Amber!? Tell me!" I yelled louder. "Calm down young man" The nurse said as she attempted to take my pulse. "No! I want to see her!" I insisted, getting out of bed. The nurse desperately tried to push me back into bed but I was stronger then her so she gave up and told me where I would find Amber. With my whole body aching, I made my way to her room. When I entered the room, I saw Amber lying in bed with machines plugged all around her. It was as if someone had just stabbed me in the heart. Then I saw her parents by her side, crying. They looked up and saw me. "I'm sorry, " I said crying " I... I..." I couldn't speak. Her mother ran over to me and instead of hitting me or yelling at me like I expected her to, she took me in her arms and held me tight. Her father did the same. I knew they forgave me but I could never forgive myself. I sat myself in the chair next to her bed and took her soft gentle hand into mine. I refused to move until she came back to me. Everybody told me to get some rest but I didn't care about myself. So they just left me by her side. Two days later, as I still sat next to Amber's bed, she started to wake up. I was about to call a doctor but she told me not to. You're awake!" I practically yelled crying. "You're ok." She said quietly, smiling. "Yeah but I would trade places with you in a heart beat. Do you know how much it hurts me too see you like this?" "Jesse?" "Yeah?" something in her voice worried me. "I love you" "I love you too but-" "Tell my parents and Brady I love them and promise you'll never forget me." She said crying. "WHAT? NO! YOU CAN'T LEAVE ME!" I screamed crying. "I love you Jess." She cried as she closed her eyes. "NO! DON'T GO!" I yelled louder. Her dad ran in when he heard me as the heart monitor went flat. I ran out of the way and into his arms as doctors and nurses rushed to Amber's side.
    One year later
    The doctors did everything they could that day to save Amber but it was hopeless. We had lost her forever. She was gone and would never come back. To this day, people still tiptoe around me, scared of what I might do if they mention her name and to tell you the truth, I don't blame them. It's exactly one year today since Amber died so I lay here on my bed tears rolling down my cheeks looking at a picture of Amber and I as a song on the radio caught my attention.
    Although you're so many miles from me
    I just want you to know I could never forget you... Sitting here in my room alone
    Got the radio on
    And it's playing our song
    I keep your picture beside my bed
    And as I hold it so close
    I keep hearing you saying
    "I love you, and wherever I am, I'm thinking of you"
    So until you come back to me... (Chorus)
    I'll send my love to you straight from the heart
    Baby I miss you, baby I miss you
    I feel you so near though we're so far apart
    Baby I miss you, baby I miss you Tears like rain falling from my eyes
    As we said our good-byes
    I could feel my heart break
    Only emptiness filled my soul
    I was half not whole
    ... I promised her that I wouldn't let anything happen to her and I broke that promise. But one promise I'll never brake is the one of never forgetting her cause she's the one person I'll never forget.

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    5 tree that wood

    Once there were three trees on a hill in the woods. They were discussing their hopes and dreams when the first tree said, "Someday I hope to be a treasure chest. I could be filled with gold, silver.I could be decorated with intricate carving and everyone would see the beauty.Then the second tree said, "Someday I will be a mighty ship. I will take kings and queens across the waters. Everyone will feel safe in me because of the strength of my hull." Finally, the third tree said, "I want to grow to be the tallest and straightest tree in the forest. People will see me on top of the hill and look up to my branches, and think of the heavens and God and how close to them I am reaching. I will be the greatest tree of all time and people will always remember me." After a few years of praying that their dreams would come true, a group of woodsmen came upon the trees. When one came to the first tree he said, "This looks like a strong tree, I think I should be able to sell the wood to a carpenter" ... and he began cutting it down. The tree was happy, because he knew that the carpenter would make him into a treasure chest. At the second tree a woodsman said, "This looks like a strong tree, I should be able to sell it to the shipyard." The second tree was happy because he knew he was on his way to becoming a mighty ship. When the woodsmen came upon the third tree, the tree was frightened because he knew that if they cut him down his dreams would not come true. One of the woodsmen said, "I don't need anything special from my tree so I'll take this one", and he cut it down. When the first tree arrived at the carpenters, he was made into a feed box for animals. He was then placed in a barn and filled with hay. This was not at all what he had prayed for. The second tree was cut and made into a small fishing boat. His dreams of being a mighty ship and carrying kings had come to an end. The third tree was cut into large pieces and left alone in the dark. The years went by, and the trees forgot about their dreams. Then one day, a man and woman came to the barn. She gave birth and they placed the baby in the hay in the feed box that was made from the first tree. The man wished that he could have made a crib for the baby, but this manger would have to do. The tree could feel the importance of this event and knew that it had held the greatest treasure of all time. Years later, a group of men got in the fishing boat made from the second tree. One of them was tired and went to sleep. While they were out on the water, a great storm arose and the tree didn't think it was strong enough to keep the men safe. The men woke the sleeping man, and he stood and said "Peace" and the storm stopped. At this time, the tree knew that it had carried the King of Kings in its boat. Finally, someone came and got the third tree. It was carried through the streets as the people mocked the man who was carrying it. When they came to a stop, the man was nailed to the tree and raised in the air to die at the top of a hill. When Sunday came, the tree came to realize that it was strong enough to stand at the top of the hill and be as close to God as was possible, because Jesus had been crucified on it.
    The moral of this story is that when things don't seem to be going your way, always know that God has a plan for you. If you place your trust in Him, He will give you great gifts. Each of the trees got what they wanted, just not in the way they had imagined. We don't always know what God's plans are for us. We just know that His ways are not our ways, but His ways are always best

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    9 A box full of kisses

    [COLOR="DarkOrchid"]The story goes that some time ago, a man punished his 3-year-old daughter for wasting a roll of gold wrapping paper. Money was tight and he became infuriated when the child tried to decorate a box to put under the Christmas tree. Nevertheless, the little girl brought the gift to her father the next morning and said, "This is for you, Daddy”
    The man was embarrassed by his earlier overreaction, but his anger flared again when he found out the box was empty. He yelled at her, stating, "Don't you know, when you give someone a present, there is supposed to be something inside? The little girl looked up at him with tears in her eyes and cried, "Oh, Daddy, it's not empty at all. I blew kisses into the box. They're all for you, Daddy."
    The father was crushed. He put his arms around his little girl, and he begged for her forgiveness.
    Only a short time later, an accident took the life of the child. It is also told that her father kept that gold box by his bed for many years and, whenever he was discouraged, he would take out an imaginary kiss and remember the love of the child who had put it there.[/COLOR


    ]
    In a very real sense, each one of us, as humans beings, have been given a gold container filled with unconditional love and kisses... from our children, family members, friends, and God. There is simply no other possession, anyone could hold, more precious than this.

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  9. #48
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    پيش فرض Please read my short story

    Hi, dear friends
    I have an mid-term exam tomorrow and this is my short story.‎

    Please check it and let me know if you find anything wrong in it.‎

    thants a million

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    The Thorn Bird

    Maggie was 49 years old when she lost her son, Dayn. He finished ‎priest school and wanted to spend his holiday in Greece but he ‎drown when he was trying to save some people. In Greece happend ‎a revolution so Maggie couldn't bring his body back to Australia. ‎At first she asked help from bishop Ralf but he refused so she had ‎tell him the truth.‎

    Maggie and bishop Ralf first met eachother 40 years ago, ‎when Maggie was 9 years old. Despite Ralf was about 20 years ‎older than Maggie they loved eachother since they met, but they ‎couldn't marry. When she was 15, he went to the Cindney and after ‎‎5 years, she married. Her husband loved his work more than his ‎wife even after their first baby girl was born. Maggie didn't tolerate ‎his unkindness and went back home.‎

    Ralf transfered to Rome, so he wanted to say goodbye to Maggie, ‎but she never told the truth to Ralf that Daye was his son.‎

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    حـــــرفـه ای Reza1969's Avatar
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    Hi, dear friends
    I have an mid-term exam tomorrow and this is my short story.‎

    Please check it and let me know if you find anything wrong in it.‎

    thants a million

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    The Thorn Bird

    Maggie was 49 years old when she lost her son, Dayn. He finished ‎priest school and wanted to spend his holiday in Greece but he ‎drown when he was trying to save some people. In Greece happend ‎a revolution so Maggie couldn't bring his body back to Australia. ‎At first she asked help from bishop Ralf but he refused so she had ‎tell him the truth.‎

    Maggie and bishop Ralf first met eachother 40 years ago, ‎when Maggie was 9 years old. Despite Ralf was about 20 years ‎older than Maggie they loved eachother since they met, but they ‎couldn't marry. When she was 15, he went to the Cindney and after ‎‎5 years, she married. Her husband loved his work more than his ‎wife even after their first baby girl was born. Maggie didn't tolerate ‎his unkindness and went back home.‎

    Ralf transfered to Rome, so he wanted to say goodbye to Maggie, ‎but she never told the truth to Ralf that Daye was his son.‎
    Hi buddy

    I noticed the following mistakes in the text:

    He finished_He had finished

    ‎priest school_religious school

    drown_drowned

    when he was trying_while he was trying

    In Greece happened a revolution_A revolution had happened in Greece

    at first_at first,

    she asked help from bishop Ralf_she asked bishop Ralph for help

    Ralf_Ralph

    she had ‎tell him_she had to tell him

    Despite Ralf was about 20 years ‎older than Maggie they loved eachother since they met_ Despite Ralf was about 20 years ‎older than Maggie, they loved each other since they had met

    the Cindney_Sidney(do you men this city?)

    didn't tolerate_couldn't tolerate

    Ralf transfered_Ralf was transferred

    Daye was his son_Dayn was his son


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    اگه نباشه جاش خالی می مونه shahrzad2006's Avatar
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    Oct 2006
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    FAIRY TALES OF HANS CHRISTIAN ANDERSEN

    THE ANGEL

    by Hans Christian Andersen

    "WHENEVER a good child dies, an angel of God comes down from heaven, takes the dead child in his arms, spreads out his great white wings, and flies with him over all the places which the child had loved during his life. Then he gathers a large handful of flowers, which he carries up to the Almighty, that they may bloom more brightly in heaven than they do on earth. And the Almighty presses the flowers to His heart, but He kisses the flower that pleases Him best, and it receives a voice, and is able to join the song of the chorus of bliss."

    These words were spoken by an angel of God, as he carried a dead child up to heaven, and the child listened as if in a dream. Then they passed over well-known spots, where the little one had often played, and through beautiful gardens full of lovely flowers.

    "Which of these shall we take with us to heaven to be transplanted there?" asked the angel.

    Close by grew a slender, beautiful, rose-bush, but some wicked hand had broken the stem, and the half-opened rosebuds hung faded and withered on the trailing branches.

    "Poor rose-bush!" said the child, "let us take it with us to heaven, that it may bloom above in God's garden."

    The angel took up the rose-bush; then he kissed the child, and the little one half opened his eyes. The angel gathered also some beautiful flowers, as well as a few humble buttercups and heart's-ease.

    "Now we have flowers enough," said the child; but the angel only nodded, he did not fly upward to heaven.

    It was night, and quite still in the great town. Here they remained, and the angel hovered over a small, narrow street, in which lay a large heap of straw, ashes, and sweepings from the houses of people who had removed. There lay fragments of plates, pieces of plaster, rags, old hats, and other rubbish not pleasant to see. Amidst all this confusion, the angel pointed to the pieces of a broken flower-pot, and to a lump of earth which had fallen out of it. The earth had been kept from falling to pieces by the roots of a withered field-flower, which had been thrown amongst the rubbish.

    "We will take this with us," said the angel, "I will tell you why as we fly along."

    And as they flew the angel related the history.

    "Down in that narrow lane, in a low cellar, lived a poor sick boy; he had been afflicted from his childhood, and even in his best days he could just manage to walk up and down the room on crutches once or twice, but no more. During some days in summer, the sunbeams would lie on the floor of the cellar for about half an hour. In this spot the poor sick boy would sit warming himself in the sunshine, and watching the red blood through his delicate fingers as he held them before his face. Then he would say he had been out, yet he knew nothing of the green forest in its spring verdure, till a neighbor's son brought him a green bough from a beech-tree. This he would place over his head, and fancy that he was in the beech-wood while the sun shone, and the birds carolled gayly. One spring day the neighbor's boy brought him some field-flowers, and among them was one to which the root still adhered. This he carefully planted in a flower-pot, and placed in a window-seat near his bed. And the flower had been planted by a fortunate hand, for it grew, put forth fresh shoots, and blossomed every year. It became a splendid flower-garden to the sick boy, and his little treasure upon earth. He watered it, and cherished it, and took care it should have the benefit of every sunbeam that found its way into the cellar, from the earliest morning ray to the evening sunset. The flower entwined itself even in his dreams- for him it bloomed, for him spread its perfume. And it gladdened his eyes, and to the flower he turned, even in death, when the Lord called him. He has been one year with God. During that time the flower has stood in the window, withered and forgotten, till at length cast out among the sweepings into the street, on the day of the lodgers' removal. And this poor flower, withered and faded as it is, we have added to our nosegay, because it gave more real joy than the most beautiful flower in the garden of a queen."

    "But how do you know all this?" asked the child whom the angel was carrying to heaven.

    "I know it," said the angel, "because I myself was the poor sick boy who walked upon crutches, and I know my own flower well."

    Then the child opened his eyes and looked into the glorious happy face of the angel, and at the same moment they found themselves in that heavenly home where all is happiness and joy. And God pressed the dead child to His heart, and wings were given him so that he could fly with the angel, hand in hand. Then the Almighty pressed all the flowers to His heart; but He kissed the withered field-flower, and it received a voice. Then it joined in the song of the angels, who surrounded the throne, some near, and others in a distant circle, but all equally happy. They all joined in the chorus of praise, both great and small,- the good, happy child, and the poor field-flower, that once lay withered and cast away on a heap of rubbish in a narrow, dark street.

    THE END.

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