Let's Complete The Story

[mohammad.clergyman]

As it seems ; looking at the subject ; there will be a story here which will about to be completed gradually

Lots of aims can be imagined for this topic and the benefits are quiet clear ; despite it’s better to mention them in order to clarify the purposes as well as advantages

Some of those are as the following

Correcting our English structures specially the usage of past tenses in our Writing

Developing our vocabulary ; reading others posts

Making a friendly atmosphere in which we can get progressed

Utilizing the best structures ; words ; prepositions and so on

Extending our creativity in English

Some rules and guidance about this topic

All of the story must be in the blue color
The story must not get finished at any cost
Each post must have at least two sentences about the story
Prevent correcting others posts directly i.e. it must be attached to your post about story
Try to make an exciting situation in the story when the next post is supposed to follow

Looking forward to have an active topic here

Thanks a lot

[mohammad.clergyman]

In The name of who created the story of life

Once upon a time ; there lived a beautiful young woman and a handsome young man ; they were very poor but as they were deeply in love they wanted to get married

....But

[Petros]

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[mohammad.clergyman]

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Hi dear

The forms and the aims of your topic are quiet different than mine since there the characters of the story have been mentioned and the purpose admittedly is various

Thanks due to your attention

[mir@]

In The name of who created the story of life

Once upon a time ; there lived a beautiful young woman and a handsome young man ; they were very poor but as they were deeply in love they wanted to get married

But in a gloomy night, the poor boy was hit by a horse drawn carriage and missed both his legs! c

[mohammad.clergyman]

In The name of who created the story of life

Once upon a time ; there lived a beautiful young woman and a handsome young man ; they were very poor but as they were deeply in love they wanted to get married

But in a gloomy night, the poor boy was hit by a horse drawn carriage and missed both his legs!

although the girl became really sad about it ; and cried for two days long it didn't decrease her strong love ; she still had lots of hopes for their lives then was the time she realized that she must work harder to make a better life for her love and make him hopeful as well


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[mir@]

In The name of who created the story of life

Once upon a time ; there lived a beautiful young woman and a handsome young man ; they were very poor but as they were deeply in love they wanted to get married

But in a gloomy night, the poor boy was hit by a horse drawn carriage and missed both his legs!

although the girl became really sad about it ; and cried for two days long it didn't decrease her strong love ; she still had lots of hopes for their lives then was the time she realized that she must work harder to make a better life for her love and make him hopeful as well.

Poor young woman was working very hard to cover the expenses of their humble life. A week later, she suddenly realized that she was pregnant and could not work any more!c


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[A r c h i]

Once upon a time ; there lived a beautiful young woman and a handsome young man ; they were very poor but as they were deeply in love they wanted to get married

But in a gloomy night, the poor boy was hit by a horse drawn carriage and missed both his legs!

although the girl became really sad about it ; and cried for two days long it didn't decrease her strong love ; she still had lots of hopes for their lives then was the time she realized that she must work harder to make a better life for her love and make him hopeful as well.

Poor young woman was working very hard to cover the expenses of their humble life. A week later, she suddenly realized that she was pregnant and could not work any more!c

It was a hard situation for both of them, It was destiny or whatever it had happened, So they should think of a solution, the best way to carry on and earn money was working at home. The woman decided to bake cake and pastry at home for man to sell in town.

But all of a sudden

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p.s. why we always try to make miserable stories? why it shouldn't be a detective one ?l

[mohammad.clergyman]

Once upon a time ; there lived a beautiful young woman and a handsome young man ; they were very poor but as they were deeply in love they wanted to get married

But in a gloomy night, the poor boy was hit by a horse drawn carriage and missed both his legs!

although the girl became really sad about it ; and cried for two days long it didn't decrease her strong love ; she still had lots of hopes for their lives then was the time she realized that she must work harder to make a better life for her love and make him hopeful as well.

Poor young woman was working very hard to cover the expenses of their humble life. A week later, she suddenly realized that she was pregnant and could not work any more!c

It was a hard situation for both of them, It was destiny or whatever it had happened, So they should think of a solution, the best way to carry on and earn money was working at home. The woman decided to bake cake and pastry at home for man to sell in town.

But all of a sudden there was a letter written by Dr R.M recently sent from his hospital

it's quiet unbelievable ; the woman said ; it was as a gift given to her because of her all attempts for handling their lives

There was written incredibly that he's gonna be ok due to a new medicine which was just discovered

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p.s No problem I made it better as you wanted ; i will try to make it more exciting you please do

[love-to-learn]

Once upon a time ; there lived a beautiful young woman and a handsome young man ; they were very poor but as they were deeply in love they wanted to get married



But in a gloomy night, the poor boy was hit by a horse drawn carriage and missed both his legs!

although the girl became really sad about it ; and cried for two days long it didn't decrease her strong love ; she still had lots of hopes for their lives then was the time she realized that she must work harder to make a better life for her love and make him hopeful as well.

Poor young woman was working very hard to cover the expenses of their humble life. A week later, she suddenly realized that she was pregnant and could not work any more!c

It was a hard situation for both of them, It was destiny or whatever it had happened, So they should think of a solution, the best way to carry on and earn money was working at home. The woman decided to bake cake and pastry at home for man to sell in town.

But all of a sudden there was a letter written by Dr R.M recently sent from his hospital


it's quiet unbelievable ; the woman said ; it was as a gift given to her because of her all attempts for handling their lives


There was written incredibly that he's gonna be ok due to a new medicine which was just discovered


They arranged a meeting with the doctor for the week after that and were both impatiently waiting for the promised day. The doctor had assured them of good results.
They went to bed early the night before. But when she got up the next morning, she was shocked not to see her beloved husband in his bed! She searched everywhere thoroughly but no trace. He was really missing....